Kind of a particular question but here goes nothing:
Will there be a chapter where Pam wears leggings/yoga pants (semi-transparent) and gives Jeremy a deepthroat hummer in a fitting room at the mall? Pam basically makes Jeremy follow her around the mall to tease him.
In my brainstorming notes, I coincidentally have all three of those story elements jotted down (leggings, bj, fitting room). But I'm not sure all three would happen at the same time...
Amazing story. This isn't my usual cup of tea but you make it work so well. Exciting plot, realistic characters, naughty sex. Started it this morning and couldn't stop until I read every chapter.
In the brainstorming notes ...I would LOVE to see ...thigh high high heeled boots...red glossy lipstick and doggystyle action...a VERY vocal Pam...and at the same time.....just a suggestion AWESOME story so far...I am a true fan!!!!!!!
It started with Pam helping Jeremy on his road to the discovery of pleasure, but lately it seems like she's begun training him to please her and his desires are taking a back seat. I hope we still get to see Jeremy enjoying himself in the future!
If we were to tally the score, I'm pretty sure Jeremy would have a sizable lead over Pam. That being said, yes, we will get to see him enjoying himself in the future. ;)
Just started the Jeremy series. I'm up to chapter 9. Do you realize how rare it is to have Fb stories? Especially by female authors? I'm guessing that you are. I sure would like to talk to you more about your stories.
Pam & Jeremy have been almost caught by Kate. Kate keeps asking how Pam got Jeremy to calm down. At what point, Kate going to either catch Pam & Jeremy having fum or Pam explains how she is able to keep Jeremy so attentive.
Excellent! The Jeremy series is great (better than I expected as I'm typically into more graphic and brutal) I believe I've read all you've produced thus far. I am definitely a fan.
Thank you so much for this brilliant story. Please do not stop. I'm secretly hoping for Jeremy to become more assertive and for him to surprise Pam by playing with her ass. Can't wait for the next chapters!
I've been trying to send you feedback from the asstr.org page but it doesn't work. Do you know what is wrong? I´ll keep reading comments waiting for an answer. Thanks!
What a fantastic series of stories .Without doubt one of the best Ive ever read. There are so few Fb stories of this calibre about. Please dont stop, and although this is a love story I would be delighted if it got even raunchier and Pam involved some of the other boys.
Looking forward to the next chapter! Is there any indication on when you're going to release it? I can only subscribe to the comment above - I wanna read more... and more ;)
I have only written two pages of the next chapter, so I really don't know when it will be done. I've given up on completion estimates because I can never stick to it. I'll create a new blog post here when it is done.
Otherwise, you can reply here and ask to be added to the email list. I send out an email notification each time a new chapter is posted. I currently have around 40 people on the list. Their info is always kept private and they've never been spammed from me. (Back me up, email subscribers.)
Yes..I can attest. I've been on the email notification since early on an only receive messages when there's a new chapter or I've inquired. I just can't wait to find out what happens now that Jeremy's 12 yo!
Why don't you just upload the text file to mega or whatever. Something temporary maybe. Then post the link .even if it gets taken down I'm sure someone would reup and host again.
A nice suggestion, but it's too user-unfriendly. It's like running a speakeasy when I'd rather be in the post-Prohibition era where there's a bar on every corner.
Just finished 19, I don't really know how I can complement you enough without sounding cheesy but rarely find stories as good as this and so deserving of praise. That ending was fantastic, the story had me lose track of time, and I'm having a hard time picking just one favorite moment. I hope your holidays were great and thank you for writing.
Oh God, that was tight! I love reading your Jeremy stories, don't you ever dare to stop lol <3
ReplyDeleteKind of a particular question but here goes nothing:
ReplyDeleteWill there be a chapter where Pam wears leggings/yoga pants (semi-transparent) and gives Jeremy a deepthroat hummer in a fitting room at the mall? Pam basically makes Jeremy follow her around the mall to tease him.
In my brainstorming notes, I coincidentally have all three of those story elements jotted down (leggings, bj, fitting room). But I'm not sure all three would happen at the same time...
DeleteThat was great,loved it. Please dont stop writing these stories!
DeleteAmazing story. This isn't my usual cup of tea but you make it work so well. Exciting plot, realistic characters, naughty sex. Started it this morning and couldn't stop until I read every chapter.
ReplyDeleteI'm making binge-reading cool again. Thank you!
DeleteIn the brainstorming notes ...I would LOVE to see ...thigh high high heeled boots...red glossy lipstick and doggystyle action...a VERY vocal Pam...and at the same time.....just a suggestion
ReplyDeleteAWESOME story so far...I am a true fan!!!!!!!
I dunno. In my mind, Pam is the opposite of high heels and red lipstick...
DeleteIn my mind too.
DeleteWow, that was beautiful. Which is pretty rare in erotic fiction. Well done as always!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteIt started with Pam helping Jeremy on his road to the discovery of pleasure, but lately it seems like she's begun training him to please her and his desires are taking a back seat. I hope we still get to see Jeremy enjoying himself in the future!
ReplyDeleteSounds like every relationship ever
DeleteIf we were to tally the score, I'm pretty sure Jeremy would have a sizable lead over Pam. That being said, yes, we will get to see him enjoying himself in the future. ;)
DeleteToo many suggestions, love reading it the way you write it, keep it up!
ReplyDeleteAlso you are clever with that title.
Thank you! I will keep calm and carry on. 😇
DeleteBe honest, you've been holding on to that chapter name since you started this story right?
ReplyDeleteGuilty as charged.
DeleteJust started the Jeremy series. I'm up to chapter 9. Do you realize how rare it is to have Fb stories? Especially by female authors? I'm guessing that you are. I sure would like to talk to you more about your stories.
ReplyDeletePam & Jeremy have been almost caught by Kate. Kate keeps asking how Pam got Jeremy to calm down. At what point, Kate going to either catch Pam & Jeremy having fum or Pam explains how she is able to keep Jeremy so attentive.
ReplyDeleteExcellent! The Jeremy series is great (better than I expected as I'm typically into more graphic and brutal) I believe I've read all you've produced thus far. I am definitely a fan.
ReplyDeleteA man needs to read the next chapter ASAP
ReplyDeleteIt's been a while
ReplyDeleteIt will continue to be a while, sadly. I've written maybe two pages of the next chapter and it's been stuck that way for weeks now.
DeleteYou can’t rush art.
DeleteThank you so much for this brilliant story. Please do not stop. I'm secretly hoping for Jeremy to become more assertive and for him to surprise Pam by playing with her ass.
ReplyDeleteCan't wait for the next chapters!
I've been trying to send you feedback from the asstr.org page but it doesn't work. Do you know what is wrong? I´ll keep reading comments waiting for an answer. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteThe asstr feedback is broken! It is a site-wide issue. This blogspot page was created as a way for people to comment.
DeleteBeautiful.....
ReplyDeleteWhat a fantastic series of stories .Without doubt one of the best Ive ever read. There are so few Fb stories of this calibre about. Please dont stop, and although this is a love story I would be delighted if it got even raunchier and Pam involved some of the other boys.
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to the next chapter! Is there any indication on when you're going to release it? I can only subscribe to the comment above - I wanna read more... and more ;)
ReplyDeleteI have only written two pages of the next chapter, so I really don't know when it will be done. I've given up on completion estimates because I can never stick to it. I'll create a new blog post here when it is done.
DeleteOtherwise, you can reply here and ask to be added to the email list. I send out an email notification each time a new chapter is posted. I currently have around 40 people on the list. Their info is always kept private and they've never been spammed from me. (Back me up, email subscribers.)
Yes..I can attest. I've been on the email notification since early on an only receive messages when there's a new chapter or I've inquired.
ReplyDeleteI just can't wait to find out what happens now that Jeremy's 12 yo!
i hope you are well; you are a talented storyteller and i enjoy reading your writing
ReplyDeleteAre you okay? It's been 5 months since the last chapter...
ReplyDeleteHey Janus. When will the next chapter of this brilliant series be up???
ReplyDeleteCannot wait for it!!!!!!!!!
This is truly the most erotic stories I've ever read
ReplyDeletePLEASE continue this AWESOME story...It is top notch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteMORE MORE MORE
ReplyDeletePLEASE PLEASE
Why don't you just upload the text file to mega or whatever. Something temporary maybe. Then post the link .even if it gets taken down I'm sure someone would reup and host again.
ReplyDeleteA nice suggestion, but it's too user-unfriendly. It's like running a speakeasy when I'd rather be in the post-Prohibition era where there's a bar on every corner.
DeleteDon't listen to these perverts they just trying to ruin the store and keep it going the way you have it
ReplyDeleteJust finished 19, I don't really know how I can complement you enough without sounding cheesy but rarely find stories as good as this and so deserving of praise.
ReplyDeleteThat ending was fantastic, the story had me lose track of time, and I'm having a hard time picking just one favorite moment.
I hope your holidays were great and thank you for writing.
Thank you! My holidays were so-so but things are looking up in 2019.
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