Thursday, November 30, 2017

General comments about the Jeremy series

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79 comments:

  1. This series truely is a magnum opus, the characters are written so real and the story so well, its worth every read, you can see why the series is loved so much by readers.

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  2. I really like it. It is very well done.

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  3. Amazing! Great reactions from the boys at the party and nice surprise at the end.

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  4. Really great series! More chapters, please.Thankyou so much.

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  5. Pure gold. There is nothing else on asstr on this level.

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  6. Loving the Jeremy series. Looking forward to more.

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  7. Quality writing as always, a real pleasure to read

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  8. Keep up the good work on Jeremy and have a good Christmas. Get Jeremeys mom involved in the action lmao.

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  9. when is the next chapter

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  10. I'm really enjoying the pace, this is far more thoughtful than I thought when I stumbled on the series at the onset.

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    1. Thanks! I think the first few chapters are definitely like Season One of a new show where everyone is trying to find their voices. It took me a while to figure out what to do.

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  11. Keep up the good work, very much looking forward to the next chapter

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  12. Have to echo the other comments...well written series. Looking forward to future chapters

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  13. So I'm curious, in Chapter 13, Jeremy's Dad tells Pam she can spank Jeremy; and then in Chapter 15-1, Jeremy asks Pam about spanking...will they try it? As an admitted spanko, some of the best part of an Fm story for me is F/m spanking. Just speaking for myself. But maybe even mF spanking. maybe they each try it? I've been re-reading the series multiple times, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

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    1. Re: spanking. I don't know! I threw it in there as a tease. It mostly depends on whether I can find a way to incorporate it without disrupting the progression of the story.

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  14. Hello janus, i really enjoyed the jeremy series and wonder if u r gonna continue it. Right now it seems like a good ending but id love to read more of that story

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  15. Any idea as to when chapter 19 will be posted?

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  16. WE NEED MORE JEREMEY!!! STOP TORTURING US!!!

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  17. So I've been a long time reader, since your first story. Juet wanted to let you know the Jeremy series is my favorite across all of Asstr. Realistically and proper.

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  18. More JEREMEY!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!

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  19. Heya!
    Thank you for such an awesome series! I've enjoyed every chapter you've published and am hungry for more! Really professionally well written! Keep up the good work!

    -admirer-

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  20. Just finished chapter 1 - it's a magnificent simmering start!

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  21. Great stuff. Chapter 19 is pretty tough on the poor guy...Onward I hope to more! Best story on asstr by far.

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  22. Can't wait until Pam gets her first taste of Jeremy's semen.

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    1. I know, right? If it's any consolation, sometimes it bugs me too that we're nineteen chapters in and still haven't reached Defcon 1.

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  23. Your lovable characters, their emotional ups and downs, the crazy risks we take when we're horny - you've done a magnificent heart-pounding job so far! The first Tom Clancy novel I read, I stayed up all night reading around the clock. I can't do that 30 years later, but I'm hanging on your every chapter. Just finished chapter 13, approaching the sex talk. Already I'm worried that Jeremy will inadvertently reveal all. Eagerly awaiting Pam and Jeremy's first naked dick-to-pussy session, and like Anonymous above, can't wait for her first taste of his cum. I fondly remember my first oral orgasm at 12 or 13 - perhaps the most intense sexual experience of my life. BTW, please tell Pam to be a little more careful, lol!

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    1. Thanks! This is the first time I've been compared to Tom Clancy... ;)

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  24. Just finished chapter 19, the last available at the moment, and I had been afraid it would be the end of the story one way or another. Eagerly awaiting more! Jeremy's first penetration of Pam went the way of all earthly things - in a way unexpected and unplanned-for, and so much more delightfully memorable because of it. Thank you for weaving the taste and smell of reality into your magnificent story.

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    1. Thanks!

      It's not the end, but don't ask me when the next chapter is coming because I have no earthly idea.

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  25. Great as always!
    please keep up the good work, we love you!

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  26. Great series, the pace is perfect. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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  27. Looking forward to the next episode. Will Jeremy ejaculate inside unexpectedly, and will his mum discover them together in flagranto? Will some of the other youngsters get involved in the plot, or will it still stay just Pam and Jeremy? I can't wait. You should publish this as a full book. Excellent work!

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  28. Not about the Jeremy series, but this is the only way to comment now, so I thought I'd leave it here. The amusement park story is so hot. I wish you'd do some more stories where the girls actually get fucked, though. I know how bad I needed it when I was a little girl, and it's nice to read through your stories and imagine myself in their place.

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    1. I always shied away from penetration in my Mf stories because 1) everyone else was already writing about it and 2) I thought it seemed mechanically difficult, if not impossible. (Size differences and all.) But who knows, maybe one day...

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  29. Jeremy is fabulous, but I also would love another few chapters of the Dream Job, I thought that one had some great potential in a similar vein

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  30. I agree about the amusement park, although I go back more to Halloween, its just that perfect blend of everything and it could use a chapter 2 someday

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    1. I actually planned for a chapter 2 of 'Halloween' but it never got written because no one seemed very enthusiastic about chapter 1. When I don't get feedback, I assume that people didn't like the story. Chapter 2 was going to be an exploration of Erin's backstory.

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    2. Oh a second chapter to Halloween would be fun, or a follow up of The Camping Trip would be awesome.

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  31. Great stuff, I hope you keep it up. My favorites are The Camping Trip and Cecilia Gets a Star.

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  32. I've been following your Jeremy story for a while now and I love it. I started a little while after you posted chapter 5. Thank you for putting so much work into this. I can't wait for the next chapter.

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  33. Is there going to be another chapter to the Jeremy series?

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    1. Eventually, yes, there will be another chapter. I'm not sure when the next one will be finished though.

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    2. Eagerly awaiting (patiently).

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  34. Loved the series! So addictive I couldn't put it down.

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  35. Great series. Can't wait for the next chapter. Especially since it looks like no one else is writing new hetero material for ASSTR anymore.

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    1. I don't know how long it has been going on, but authors cannot upload to ASSTR right now so no new stories are being posted anywhere. You can tell by the fact that the main page (www.asstr.org/main.html) has no recent stories posted.

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    2. Hi Janus,

      Loved your Jeremy series since the start. I love the sense of anyicipation.

      Are you able to post the stoties here, or send it to a mailing list?

      I want to join your mailing list but i dont want to paste my address where everyone can see it.

      Thanks again

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  36. Plleeeease continue the story, I'm loving it

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  37. Do you recommend any other Fb stories?

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  38. If ASSTR doesn't return to service, any chance your works will be available elsewhere?

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  39. Are you going to be uploading your Jeremy series to any other sites in the time being?

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  40. I felt like Katherine, in "Katherine's Therapy" Reading your stories stirred up hidden feelings. Each of your stories, have a tiny piece of me in them. I was a little girl when I became family whore to 3 members of my family. My mom knew and did nothing about it. Like Katherine, I got turned on as I read each story, instead of getting sick to my stomach. If you need someone to proof read some of your new work please feel free to send to me. :)

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  41. Well... asstr.org appears not to be loading any new stories, and while I know an author is loathe to publish something without a great deal of editing, well it has been a long time...What I'm saying is, maybe post a sneak peek here? Like a sample paragraph or two? Please?

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  42. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter in the saga.
    Keep up the quality work.

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  43. I heard that authors can now upload to ASSTR again, so when do you think you'll be able to upload the next chapter in Jeremy's story?

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  44. Looks like asstr.org is running again...hope this means we'll be seeing an update soon!

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  45. Is chapter 20 done then? Any way we could get more? Would love for Pam to be on all fours, getting slammed

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  46. I absolutely adore this story <3

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  47. ASSTR is back up. Post quick before before it goes down again. ;)

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  48. I hope that you've found a new place to post since asstr is still down for the foreseeable future. The main page is completely down now, you can only access stories from the ftp site.

    But I hope you are still writing, this is one of the hottest stories I have read in a long time, and I would hate to loose it completely because of website failures. :)

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  49. Hi Janus... We've been waiting months

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  50. Pleaseeeeeeeee I need more Jeremy!!!

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  51. Enjoyed your story very much. Could not stop listening to it (voice app). I appreciate that many things are nonsequitur like spanking. I'm very interested in Pam's parents and was more intrigued by how little detail was granted. What kind of parents produce a mind like Pam's? The shift of perspective when her parents crop up seems to intentionally obscure them: perhaps Pam blocks them out of her mind. What's going on there?

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    1. A good point. Pam's parents are woefully undeveloped. In my mind, Pam's "interests" was just something she independently discovered. Like it a dormant force. It would be interesting to explore more of her relationship with her parents, but I'm not sure the readers will appreciate another sexless storyline.

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  52. asstr is back, any chance you will continue the story?

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  53. Hey, Janus, asstr is back again. (Wink, wink!) ;-)

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  54. Do you know that asstr is back online?
    (Wink, wink, nudge, nudge, say no more!)

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    1. The commenting feature is still broken though. Boo!

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  55. I've had to make about fifty phone calls reading the Jeremy series. i swear half the crap on ASSTR is "Jane is a cute girl. Jane lives in a broken house with abusive parents. Jane meets a nice guy. Jane and the nice guy are fucking and it hurts but also feels good." This is so many orders of magnitude better than anything else i;ve ever seen here.

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    1. Thank you! Your asstr summation made me laugh.

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