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Wow...you had me hard from the very start. I had been anticipating your latest chapter, and it did not disappoint
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DeleteThis is some of your best writing yet~! I have loved following this series. You really explore the details of Pam and Jeremy having chosen to keep their sensual interactions discrete in the presence of Jeremy's friends, the parents, and other persons (like April). Adds a depth of sincerity I have not read or experienced in other stories.
ReplyDeleteI tip my virtual tophat to you, Janus.
What a way to end this chapter, wow!
ReplyDeleteCan't wait to read the next chapter!
After 18 chapters, Jeremy finally hit a home run! Looking forward to more action in the next chapter. Thank you Janus!!!
ReplyDeleteGreat story. The slow build up of each chapter makes it that much better than the usual, to be frank, boring crap on asstr. Thank you for your imagination and writing talent. Quality over quantity all the time although I hope the story will continue...?
ReplyDeleteIt was amazing keep it up
ReplyDeleteGood job. It is a pity that the story ended at the best moment. I can't wait for the next part.
ReplyDeleteWhat a great hook. Masterfully done. Now I will be tormented with anticipation waiting for the next chapter. And I suspect I'm not the only one.
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OMG! Janus you're a genius ;) pls continue!!
ReplyDelete"Tootsie Pop, and it only take's three"! ;-)
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Tootsie Pop! I knew Blow Pop didn't sound quite right... ;)
DeleteDear Janus,
ReplyDeleteI discovered your Jeremy series about 6 months ago. I am one of the people who did not enjoy slow stories, i like it fast but not too fast.
But as when I read this in the first 3 chapters, i knew this would be a classic. Character building done in this series is excellent and one of the best i have read.
I wait for more of Jeremy.
Hopefully you can do a collaboration with Renpet
Wow! ('nuff said.)
ReplyDeleteWow what an amazing story. I have been savoring each chapter up till this last one like a fine wine. The slow build the beautiful descriptions of horniness and stolen sexual moments How Pam is coming to understand her attraction to beautiful young hairless dry cumming boys. I simply cannot wait for more. You truly have a classic here
ReplyDeleteGreat exploration of our beloved characters this chapter. Can’t wait to see how the next chapter shakes out.
ReplyDeleteSo glad you enjoyed my comment..."seduces the kid, then their friends, the parents, and the family pets..." I truly do enjoy this story, with slow build up, and the development and growth of the characters and their relationship. So much better than the usual, boring, "shags them all in 10,000 words or less" that is the norm on ASSTR. Keep up the good work, and hope to see another chapter soon.
ReplyDelete(blushing) Thanks!
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